Monday, November 8, 2010

Use strategies for editing

Going on these vacations with my family are always good bonding experiences and so much fun. We always get along and don't fight when were on vacation, and don't think about everything at home and all the other things in life we have to deal with. My parents don't think about work, and me and my brothers don't think about school. We love them and can hardly wait for next year.

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  1. i edited this part of my memoir a few times. this is the very end of it, which is my conclusion of the whole thing. i was never sure how to put it and it took a lot of thinking.

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